[H-VN][Partial English] Koisuru Otome to Shugo no Tate

[raven]

I almost fell of my chair translating this part.

「すみません、ちょっとお花を摘みに行ってきます」

花摘みは隠語でトイレに行くという意味です。 お嬢様語として-有里-に教わった。

Seriously WTF!?, my translation must be wrong, else it gotta the weirdest shit I've ever seen even by eroge standard.

[invictus]

Well true that, I realized that too, just couldn't be bothered elaborating. He's still 'oblivious' though, which was my only point, and he has good reasons to be; the way he was brought up and the situation he's in, kinda like Sagara Sousuke from FMP. Wasn't trying to make him sound like a shit protag xD

Right, he seems more like inexperienced and in a pretty damn difficult/annoying situation ... whereas a lot of other protags are simply hopelessly dense for no reason...

[mahou]

I almost fell of my chair translating this part.

「すみません、ちょっとお花を摘みに行ってきます」

花摘みは隠語でトイレに行くという意味です。 お嬢様語として-有里-に教わった。

Seriously WTF!?, my translation must be wrong, else it gotta the weirdest shit I've ever seen even by eroge standard.

花摘みは隠語でトイレに行くという意味です。 hanatsumi wa ingo de toire ni iku to iu imi desu. 'Flower picking is a secret message, meaning 'I'm going to the toilet'.No kidding what has flower picking and going to the toilet have to do with each other. I suppose it's some sort of saying that is beyond my Japanese skills. お嬢様語として-有里-に教わった。 'ojyousamago toshite Yuuri ni oshie watta.' 'As ladylike speech was taught to Yuuri.' my engrish interpretation. Need more context since the previous sentence didn't give me any clues.

Edit: oh it just came to me, probably ladylike speech for saying 'I need to go to the bathroom'. Incredibly subtle.

[runan92]

I almost fell of my chair translating this part.

「すみません、ちょっとお花を摘みに行ってきます」

花摘みは隠語でトイレに行くという意味です。 お嬢様語として-有里-に教わった。

Seriously WTF!?, my translation must be wrong, else it gotta the weirdest shit I've ever seen even by eroge standard.

It literally means she wants to go to the toilet, but she was so embarrassed to say it directly that she used the above sentence, and maybe Shuuji (?) learnt from Yuuri that "picking flower" is a secret word among ladies.

This is just a word playing in Japanese, in my native language which is Vietnamese, we can understand its meaning perfectly if we read something like "picking flower" (our language, Chinese, Japanese and Korean is pretty the same in meaning), but I think English doesn't have that phrase so it made you confused XD

[mahou]

Oh so it was 'Taeko's' line.

Wasn't sure who said it. So a non engrish interpetation would be.

すみません、ちょっとお花を摘みに行ってきます」
'Excuse me, I must head off to pick some flowers'.

花摘みは隠語でトイレに行くという意味です。 お嬢様語として-有里-に教わった。 '
'Flower picking is a secret message, meaning 'I'm going to the toilet'. A ladylike phrase, taught to (me) by Yuuri.' 
'me' <- omitted in Jap.

[raven]

Oh I wasn't confuse about its meaning, it's just too weird! It's not a "what does this mean" reaction, but more like a "how the fuck they come up with this" reaction. (And no, I refuse to acknowledge "that" is the first thing pop into your head when you hear the word "flower", even in Vietnamese")


Anyway, I'm done with the 023 script, do you want to take a look? If so how should I give it to you?

[runan92]

Oh I wasn't confuse about its meaning, it's just too weird! It's not a "what does this mean" reaction, but more like a "how the fuck they come up with this" reaction. (And no, I refuse to acknowledge "that" is the first thing pop into your head when you hear the word "flower", even in Vietnamese")


Anyway, I'm done with the 023 script, do you want to take a look? If so how should I give it to you?

No, only "flower" doesn't lead to that meaning in any language XD, but "picking flower" is something slang which is used to express the intention to go to the toilet in our language (Japanese and Chinese too, not so sure about Korean), and it's true that sometimes saying a sentence like "I'll go and pick a flower" can lead to misunderstanding in our language.

And if you've done with it, just send it to Nanaya through his email: phamtietnguyen@gmail.com

[shinserph]

Delicious trap is delicious.  

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[raven]

it's always the case the trap that's hotter than the real stuff.

And it's also true in real life too. If you have ever seen pro-cross dresser or true "bi", some of them can easily give fashion models a run for their money.

And I'll entertain you with some proof incase you think i'm a weirdo

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And I dare you to find a better Yuna cosplay

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Remember it's a trap, so don't get a hard on

[joshyan]

it's always the case the trap that's hotter than the real stuff.

And it's also true in real life too. If you have ever seen pro-cross dresser or true "bi", some of them can easily give fashion models a run for their money.

And I'll entertain you with some proof incase you think i'm a weirdo

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And I dare you to find a better Yuna cosplay

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Remember it's a trap, so don't get a hard on

My country have cabaret show by them as tourist attaction. 

[Mana]

You know that "if it's a trap, you must hit it", so what's wrong with them being traps?

And it's not hard for that Yuna cosplay to be one of the best ones there is, given how most of the ones that I've seen has given me the urge to rip my eyes off.

[shinserph]

You know that "if it's a trap, you must hit it", so what's wrong with them being traps?

And it's not hard for that Yuna cosplay to be one of the best ones there is, given how most of the ones that I've seen has given me the urge to rip my eyes off.

There's absolutely nothing wrong with them being traps. They're full of win.

[raven]

And it's not hard for that Yuna cosplay to be one of the best ones there is, given how most of the ones that I've seen has given me the urge to rip my eyes off.

Actually I think this is better. and it's real too.

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I hope it was pleasant to Manasama eye

[Mana]

Actually, "Mana-sama" was my nick 8 years ago.

I counter with this:

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[laplacian]

Mana-kun, Mana-kun, you like !?

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